Final performance in front of the class using the suggestions we got from earlier feedback.
Mrs. Kirk
10/22/2012 10:58:01 pm
Everyone shared their ideas for your performance and worked well together as a team, sharing strong ideas and knowledge of drama. You related your drama to the theme of corruption and your intention to show how this could people can be brought was shown well through your performance. Your use of flashback helped to structure the scene well. Good use of legal vocabulary to make you scene realistic. You used levels and space well to show relationship and character. To improve extend your scene and use a convention at the moment that you criminal decides to bribe the witness and the witness decides to take the bribe. E.g. freeze frame, spoken thought, narration etc. Also use your pauses and low vocal pitch to create variety and tension in your scene. Leave a Reply. | ArchivesMay 2013 Categories |
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